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Can you please check these captions for effectivenss?
* The play of the sun’s rays on clouds, photographed by Jim Corvil
* The sun’s rays reflecting on still lake waters, photographed by Jim Corvil
* The sun shining on muddy waters, photographed by Jim Corvil
The above are captions I'm writing for a calendar containing nature photographs. Are there any unnecessary articles in the above captions? If yes, can you remove them and make the captions more effective? Also, can I use 'caught on camera' instead of 'photographed' (the photos are not out of the ordinary)?
Thank you.
All lovely, and 'caught on camera' is fine too. Well done. Sounds very atmospheric!
Maybe in the second you could have: "The sun's rays reflected on still lake waters". Or "the still lake water" perhaps, but yours is fine too.
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